有没有大佬帮忙解答，假如完全按照老师这个模式写，大概能有多少分翻译
然后，我写了一个第一句，帮忙做出点评，谢谢各位大佬(我自己写的，没看up老师讲解前）
As one of the most important ancient trade roads in the area of southwest of China,Tea-Horse Road,which consists of two main roads,Dianzang line and Chuanzang line,has complex route,with the length of thousands of kilomiles.
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yu夏luottt2026-06-03
这次六级一定要过啊！
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Zn_Cu_62026-06-03
As one of the most vital ancient trade ways in Southwest China, the Tea-Horse Road is comprised of two main arteries: the Dianzang line and the Chuanzang line. The line-net is intricate and aggregates many thousands of km. The ancient road is famous for tea and horses. The operation of the road plays an important role in enhancing the economic relationship between Han zones and the border area which minority live. From a historical and cultural perspective, the Tea-Horse Road is not only a hub for promoting national culture communication and study, but also it is a commercial channel for exchanging items. Because of the long-term communication, the nation has been affected, developed mutually, and made multicultural sights. The protection of cultural heritage and the sustainable development of tourism have been a hot issue among scholars and the government.
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王啦啦啦啦啦啦惠2026-06-05
打卡[doge_金箍]
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锤锤是谁2026-06-03
打卡[OK]
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肥鱼不菲2026-06-09
border area边疆地区，boarder是寄宿生
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失眠月亮船2026-06-03
像刚起床录的
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足球0012026-06-03
[doge]
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我又不是想要月亮zz2026-06-10
打卡
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柠柠蕾2026-06-03
打卡[奥比岛_点赞]
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一小时很快就过去2026-06-03
问，单词老师讲的时候写出来就知道，自己写的时候想不出来怎么办[大哭]
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失眠月亮船2026-06-03
瑞哥飘逸的发型
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颠倒绝境景色2026-06-11
新生报道[打call][打call][打call]
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余火变相l2026-06-03
茶马古道这类词语，考试的时候能不能写成拼音Chama ancient road，自己写的时候真把马拼写错了[笑哭]
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祝大家顺利通过
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boarder没有边疆的意思，应该是border
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我就说嘛咋这么熟悉[doge]
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已经写力竭了[委屈]
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有没有大佬帮忙解答，假如完全按照老师这个模式写，大概能有多少分翻译 然后，我写了一个第一句，帮忙做出点评，谢谢各位大佬(我自己写的，没看up老师讲解前） As one of the most important ancient trade roads in the area of southwest of China,Tea-Horse Road,which consists of two main roads,Dianzang line and Chuanzang line,has complex route,with the length of thousands of kilomiles.
♥ 11 ↩ 10
这次六级一定要过啊！
♥ 11
As one of the most vital ancient trade ways in Southwest China, the Tea-Horse Road is comprised of two main arteries: the Dianzang line and the Chuanzang line. The line-net is intricate and aggregates many thousands of km. The ancient road is famous for tea and horses. The operation of the road plays an important role in enhancing the economic relationship between Han zones and the border area which minority live. From a historical and cultural perspective, the Tea-Horse Road is not only a hub for promoting national culture communication and study, but also it is a commercial channel for exchanging items. Because of the long-term communication, the nation has been affected, developed mutually, and made multicultural sights. The protection of cultural heritage and the sustainable development of tourism have been a hot issue among scholars and the government.
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打卡[doge_金箍]
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打卡[OK]
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border area边疆地区，boarder是寄宿生
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像刚起床录的
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[doge]
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打卡
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打卡[奥比岛_点赞]
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问，单词老师讲的时候写出来就知道，自己写的时候想不出来怎么办[大哭]
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瑞哥飘逸的发型
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新生报道[打call][打call][打call]
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茶马古道这类词语，考试的时候能不能写成拼音Chama ancient road，自己写的时候真把马拼写错了[笑哭]
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